June 29th, 2008, 8:25 pm

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Reply soren, June 29th, 2008, 8:38 pm

Name: Erin
Gender: F
Age: 19
Height: 5'2"
Weight: (rude)
Weapon of Choice: her gun or her "bare hands" (fangs)
species: new born Vampire.
special powers: The power to control over people (but she can only give them a two word command) and 2x speed. every vampire has at the most three special powers. For some reason she is incredably strong when it comes to controling people, and not just 'new born' strong,she gives experiensed vampires hard times with it too.
Personality:Erin is very confused about everything thats going on in her life right now. She is very very very defensive and likes to cuse... a lot XD She gets ticked off easly and hates it when people push her aside like shes nothing, eather that or assume shes weak.
History: Erin never wanted to kill. She was born into a uber rich family and lived a lonely sicluded life away from her family and other people.She was turned into a vampire when she snuck away from her security into a crowd of people at a concert. The first thing she did after being turned was kill a drunk guy. it had only been a few minutes before she was picked up by another vsampire, told the rules, was taught how to use her new powers, than dumped to fend on her own in. She is now cursed to kill people every week.

signiture: Her signiture is that after she bites the person and drains there blood, she shoots them in the neck where she bit them so it looks like the gun killed them.
file name: the name on her wanted file is ironicly "The alley vampire"


Power rules: Her powers arn't something she can throw around. Its hard to explani how she is limited with them so I'm ganna uae a meathod my friend showed me. First you have to understand 'blood points'

BP~ picture a line of 10 white dots in a row. When a normal mature vampire has had its fill of blood, all 10 dots are filled, While a younge one can only fill 5.

Each human gives them one filled in dot.

Every time they wake up they have lost one from the previous day.

When a vampire has three BP left, it starts to hesitate around people and see everything as food and not living things, 2 they loose control of themselves, and 1 they go on a killing spree.

Every time Erin uses her dominating power she loses a blood point. That power only has a 50 pressent chance of working so it might not be worth it.

If she does use it corectly, she can only command the person to do something they have done before. So something like "Leave me" or "Go away" Sonce the person has obviously left somewhere before they must do that.

She can't tell someone to "kill yourself," Or "Shoot (insert name here)" ..Well... that is unless they have shot that person before... but since they've never died they can't do that >:

Every time she uses her speed power she looses 1 BP. When she uses it, she is running 2xs faster than the world reacord XD So rly its 2xs more than a normal person, but whatever.


ok I think thats it.

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Reply Radioactive-Blowout, June 29th, 2008, 8:47 pm

She's wonderful XD

...will she kill me if I hug her?...o-o

Reply soren, June 29th, 2008, 8:49 pm

it depends on how close she gets to your neck >D

Reply Phooka, June 30th, 2008, 10:27 am

But a two word command could be "Kill yourself". o____O
But I love her.

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